Actually, this poem is my recital. After my tiny tenure at Cambridge I did some traveling throughout Europe. Incredible doesn't begin to explain it. This is something different than I usually post, but I wrote this upon returning to the States.
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I walk through flowered courtyards of
Dancing shadows of prior love
who hand in hand beneath stained glass
caressed on beds of gentle grass
This fortress quiet, so divine
stood strong and solid over time
to all of those preceding me
who came to live, to love, to dream
and promenade in stone hallways
and languish in the sun-filled days
all along the river clear
I can almost see them standing here
with peace so deep and hope so wide
in this English countryside
I cross the river's Bridge of Sighs
memories do cloud my eyes
all my recent yesterdays
keep me in a daydreams haze
I've touched paupers, princes, kings
dreamed alive a thousand things
my soul, she does feel wonderful
for what's become a ritual
on rooftop watched as punters crept
passion shared while Cambridge slept
hearts ignited and burned for sure
as pipers played in Edinburgh
sunlight streams on meadows full
while pale eyes did search my soul
toward the sky a hopeful call
that goodbye would never come at all
where baths were swirling, steaming, wet
on lips the softest kisses set
sultry nights, peppered black
with moonlight pouring down my back
I danced in Barcelona's streets
laid where sand and ocean meets
serenaded as a stranger sings
inspired by what morning brings
catch the glances, stroll along
cathedral plays her mid-day song
Climb to top of spiral stairs
a balcony is hidden there
I admire the cities graceful frame
he looks at me and says the same
stolen moments in fountain's park
gorgeous gardens still and dark
where new lovers come to meet
wrapped in Verona's midnight heat
longing looks that seem to beckon
last a lifetime, gone in seconds
fantasies becoming real
all around the Glockenspiel
Oh to live in perfect ease
magic blows in German breeze
on castle terrace, through the gate
two hearts hold their breath and wait
when tomorrow wakes to shine
they'll sail down the winding Rhine
to a farewell when they reach the shore
for fate has not allowed them more
walk the path the Seine does run
poetic words roll of the tongue
under Trocadero's looming grace
Romance built herself a place
seems long ago, a few months time
etched forever in the mind
to where clocktower stands guardian
bliss does both begin and end
delicious secrets no one knows
as the circle is slowly coming closed
filled with angels and sinners both
giving peace and forcing growth
oh to live these days again
with perfect moments hidden in
wishes could not have better planned
young woman held in Europe's hand.
JennyMac
Friday, November 6, 2009
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A lovely poem as beautiful as it's poet.... Well done, Jenny Mac, well done.
I am going to tour Europe one day, it will be amazing see things thousands of years old.
Not being of the romantic sort.
I am a ship, never having left port.
I would say by this account that you had a fine time in Europe then?
wow, that was beutiful.
Beautiful Poem!
Lovely! I used to write tons of poems--you may have just inspired me to pull some of my poems out!
I love how free you are..just dancing and swirling through space and time...so childlike
Beautiful
and you nailed it by using Glockenspiel :)
Peace ~ Rene
You made me want to get on a plane.
Very nice. Makes me want to go back to Europe. Maybe when the kids are older...and I can leave them with someone for a whole week.
-Joshua
Good for you for trying something new...I did that today, too.
I was so not trying to rhyme.
I like your poem JennyMac.
Love it! You brought me back to those carefree travel days in Europe... before kids *sigh*
Rhyming couplets? Can't go wrong.
This reminds me of Patience Strong.
This is very different compared to what you write normally!
Beautiful.I'm amazed! You write so well!
Love
Deboshree
I gave you an award over at my blog today! Congratulations!
http://sincerelyjenni.blogspot.com/2009/11/i-can-feel-love.html
Incredible, JennyMac.
This is nice. Graceful.
Beautifully written.
That is so beautiful, makes me want to pack my bags and head to airport!
I posted a poem on my blog yesterday, too---but yours is far better. Totally different subject matter, obviously, but still.
I love your couplets. And your imagery is divine. This was a pleasure to read!
Having been to those places, I feel you did a wonderful job of capturing the beauty in your words.
That is a great poem. I always wanted to write poetry but I just don't have the grace for it. Very well done.
Makes me want to go to Europe now. What a special way to remember your time there.
Beautiful.....
I wanna go :)
What a wonderful tribute to your time in Europe. Makes me want to go!
Indeed, Too Many Hats, indeed.
Jenny this is so lovely. I will remember this on my future trip to London/Paris ;-)
XOXO
So romantic, love it. It's nice to stop and reflect on such awesome memories.
I hope that everyone would have a chance to visit and travel Europe, at least once.
The bridges, castles, architecture, museums, unchanged landscape and your poem capture the essence of European history implicitly.
Wow! That took me to another place... The signs of good poem or story!
I'm so impressed with people that have poetic minds. Thanks for sharing.
You are immensley talented!
Absolutely lovely. I felt like I was there. And young.
Simply beautiful... you should post your poetry more often. I loved it!
So beautiful! Makes me nostalgic for a place I've never even been!
Impressive. Makes me wish my travel outside the US consisted of more than Montreal.
Very beautiful! You are so talented, JennyMac!!!
Beautiful. I had no idea you had so many talents and skills....
Just lovely! You have a gift.
Lovely and poignant, I like your sharing this side of you.
Makes me want to buy a ticket to Europe.
Wow, the softer side of JennyMac - plus I love that you used the word Glockenspiel
The Bridge of Sighs - I do love seeing history that is still standing, it is a gorgeous structure. Your wonderful poem took me on an adventure.
Lovely, like you.
That was fantastic! thank you for pulling it out of the archives!
~ Jen
Oh my goodness, I love this. Especially since our WIP is all about a girl who runs away to backpack through Europe.
WOW - that was fabulous! Seriously, that was so well written, you should go to Cambridge. Oh wait... ha ha Good job, J.M.!! ♥
Very cool! Europe was fun!? Or it sounded that way, anyway.
what a nice poem. thanks for sharing.
I always admire folks who write poetry. I don't have a talent for it but YOU DO so kudos!
Absolutely lovely. You've captured the feeling and retold it beautifully.
Just Beautiful! i hope to visit some day, when the kids run away or I do which ever one happens first!
What a lovely trip through Europe. I so enjoyed how you ended it.
This is exceptional. Truly exceptional. My favorite line: "longing looks that seem to beckon last a lifetime, gone in seconds"
Beautiful! I loved that you put Edinburgh in there...one of my favorite places.
Very well written...very well painted! :)
Ah, this reminds me that I had to leave someone very special in Europe when I moved back home. I need to return to him as soon as I can.
Gosh, I could have been there. Loved that JM!
xxx
Lovely poem - you've really captured Cambridge (my old university) as well as Barcelona.
Great magical memories!
You have a great way with words. This is fabulous!
Thank you.
jj
As I read over the first sixty comments I got overwhelming impression that
1) everyone liked it
2) everyone thinks you are quite talented
3) everyone is jonesing a trip to Europe now!
I, however, am left wondering if you made the tour alone (or with a man) and if people see bauty in the settings the are privaleged to see or are some places really THAT much more beautiful than others.
Either way I must agree with the masses here.....lovely writing!
Fabulous! Everyone should go at least once, and you've made me want to drop everything and pack my bags to go again!
Really beautiful. And brave. I darent post any of my poetry.
Oh, to conjure those memories...
Wow-- glad I'm catching up on some of my favorite blogs tonight.
This is totally extraordinary-- and I rarely use that word. You expressed so much, and with beauty and grace. I love this-- I'm so glad you shared it.
This is wonderful, glad you managed to get to Edinburgh, it's really a beautiful city. We are so lucky in the UK to be so near so many amazing and different places, just an hour or two on a plane and we can be in France, Spain, Italy, Germany, Finland etc it's so easy to travel here and I love hearing all the other languages.
Thank you for sharing your poem - please don't hesitate to share your poetry with us again.
Jade
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